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s henry ([personal profile] shenry) wrote in [personal profile] sendthemback 2009-11-13 09:36 am (UTC)

"Now you're just saying things to say them."

Having just done unspeakable things to reach my word count, I adore the meta-ness of this line. Ssh, Rachel, don't blow our noveling cover!

I started off the Rachel-Billo-Stephen conversation grinning, but at some point in there, it hit me, the incredible awkwardness of Rachel talking to Keith about an imagined son. Ouchie, I say, ouchie.

Also, as someone who is currently struggling with the question of whether or not it is okay to start wearing her old mall-goth clothes again, I love seeing their different reactions to the punk kids. Oh, young, preppy, upperclass Keith. How I would love to see you meet Rachel and her buzzed purple hair and leather jacket.

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